#1
Okay.. this is my FIRST song ever !!
I just wanted you to look at it and say whatever you want to say about it ?? :3 give me some response.. good and bad ! I can use it all I think.


The lie

Am-Em-G-D x2

(Am)I keep seeing you face looking (Em) down at me
(Am)I thought this was the last goodbye,
(Em) but here you are again
(Am)I keep smiling, and pretending(Em) everything is fine
(Am)But everybody but you,(Em) know that’s a lie

(Am)I really wanted this to (Em)end
(Am)But it’s so much easier(Em) to pretend
That it was just… (Am) a dream

Am-Em-G-D X2

(C)I keep shining
(G)I keep wishing
(D)I keep holding on(Em) to the memories
(C)I won’t wake up
(G)from the dream you (Em) brought me into
(D)But everybody know it’s a(Em) lie

(Am)Let this please end in a (Em)simply way
(Am)I don’t wanna push it away(Em) but I have to
(Am)All there’s left is an empty box (Em)without happiness
(Am)The fairytale is over,(Em) before it even begins

(Am)These broken wings will repare themselves over(Em) years
(Am)But it’s so much easier(Em) to pretend
That it was... (Am)reallife

-Em-G-D-Am x 2

(C)I keep shining
(G)I keep wishing
(D)I keep holding on to the memories
(C)I won’t wake up
(G)from the dream you (Em) brought me into
(D)But everybody know it’s a(Em)
(C)I keep shining
(G)I keep wishing
(D)I keep holding (Em)on to the memories
(C)I won’t wake up
(G)from the dream you (Em) brought me into
(D)But everybody know it’s a(Em) lie
#2
Pretty good. The lyrics is okay, but it looks like something you have seen before. Don't know how it fits with the chords cause i can't hear it. But okay lyrics and chords. What genre is it supposed to be?
#3
Quote by CassandraDK


The lie

Am-Em-G-D x2

(Am)I keep seeing you face looking (Em) down at me
(Am)I thought this was the last goodbye,
(Em) but here you are again
(Am)I keep smiling, and pretending(Em) everything is fine
(Am)But everybody but you,(Em) know that’s a lie

(Am)I really wanted this to (Em)end
(Am)But it’s so much easier(Em) to pretend
That it was just… (Am) a dream

Am-Em-G-D X2

(C)I keep shining
(G)I keep wishing
(D)I keep holding on(Em) to the memories
(C)I won’t wake up
(G)from the dream you (Em) brought me into
(D)But everybody know it’s a(Em) lie

(Am)Let this please end in a (Em)simply way
(Am)I don’t wanna push it away(Em) but I have to
(Am)All there’s left is an empty box (Em)without happiness
(Am)The fairytale is over,(Em) before it even begins<--This seems a litte cliche

(Am)These broken wings will repare themselves over(Em) years<--This not only sounds really cliche it just doesnt fit with what you are saying it also doesnt seem to flow well
(Am)But it’s so much easier(Em) to pretend
That it was... (Am)reallife

-Em-G-D-Am x 2

(C)I keep shining
(G)I keep wishing
(D)I keep holding on to the memories
(C)I won’t wake up
(G)from the dream you (Em) brought me into
(D)But everybody know it’s a(Em)
(C)I keep shining
(G)I keep wishing
(D)I keep holding (Em)on to the memories
(C)I won’t wake up
(G)from the dream you (Em) brought me into
(D)But everybody know it’s a(Em) lie


Other than those minor little things I think its a pretty cool song