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These are the lyrics to my band's first demo song. They're not too serious, but I'd like to hear what people have to say about them.

Mute

Fire without warning
Shooting words into my ear
When your lips start moving
I just wish I’d disappear
Talking like a record player
Stuck and on repeat
When you feel like talking girl
Just wait til I’m asleep

Love to see you coming
Hate to see you leave
I said don’t preach to me
Don’t tell me what I need

Wake up in the morning with a ringing in my head
Notice you’re still talking so I get up out of bed
Eat my fruit and then it hits me
Figured it all out
When you feel like talking girl
Just put this in your mouth

Love to see you coming
Hate to see you leave
I said don’t preach to me
Don’t tell me what I need