#1
Hey Everyone:

I've recently started writing my own material. I'm curious to see what people (who are not friends and family) really think about it. Please take a look at my youtube videos and give me youre honest opion. All I ask is that you be respectful. If you don't like something, tell me why. Don't just say it sucks.

Thanks,
Dave

Let It Go
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fhZSrkXvdrk

I Miss You
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RAca1r-dVRw

All Around You
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LN0TTMwDH7Q
#2
You're breaking like five rules. Read them.

'ported.
Today I feel electric grey
I hope tomorrow, neon black