#1
Just another song that I wrote and I need some feedback on it. Not much else to say. Scale of 1-10 would be great too. Thanks guys
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#2
I don't personally like deathcore, but this song was pretty good one anyway. You used pretty brutal riffs also nice lead parts. I liked guitar pan changes alot. Adding synths wasn't bad idea too. Reminds me from the faceless somehow. Good idea to end the song chilly. 9/10. Really positive suprise from deathcore song.
#3
This song was alright at best, It was just a little too death for me, the riffs were decent, from a composers standpoint.
Overall, 6/10
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Last edited by MattAnderson111 at Nov 27, 2009,
#4
Quote by MattAnderson111
This song was alright at best, It was just a little too death for me, the riffs were decent, from a composers standpoint.

Overall, 6/10

It's called DEATHcore for a reason. I think it deserves an 8.5/10. The only part I didn't like was the ending.
#5
Quote by DudE132
It's called DEATHcore for a reason. I think it deserves an 8.5/10. The only part I didn't like was the ending.


I gave it a unbiased crit you dickhead.

The atmosphere isn't my preference.

You see where it says the riffs were alright from a composers standpoint.


Plus, I can crit however I want, it's my opinion.

I listen to Whitechapel and Carnifex, this song just didn't hit me that hard.
Poop.


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#6
^^Seriously dude wtf? Whitechapel is a lot more "death" than this. How can it possibly be too death for you?

Either way TS, I quite liked it...the synth's were a nice touch, bit different from standard deathcore. One thing I will say though is that some of the leads were a bit too simplistic for my liking (on guitar and synth), and some sections dragged on a bit (although I'm sure vocals would help that). I'd like to hear it with proper instruments and synth sounds and with vocals instead of GP.

Overall 7/10
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#7
I'm talking about a writers standpoint.

I like Whitechapel, but I won't write music like it.
Poop.


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#8
But he wants feedback....surely the point is to let him know what you think from a listener's point of view?
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#9
Ending seemed as if it belonged to a different song lol..

7/10 overall, but only because i'm not a massive fan of the genre.

I did like the ideas, and how the two guitars played different melodies. It had some very good ideas tbh, so that ranks it highly.
#11
I was really surprised. I usually don't like deathcore at all, and I normally don't like atmosphere when it's used in similar ways that you used it here.

But in your case it worked perfectly, everything flowed. The ending atmosphere reminded me of a slower Strapping Young Lad.

I really like that one kind of blast (it's in bar 59 and 63, and throughout the song... but those were just the first two I saw and decided to let you know). They really emphasize whatever you're playing at that moment.

I'd give this song a 9/10 and only because I didn't really like the breakdown or the tremolo riff at 51, but since you move on quickly you don't lose much in my book.

Really great song overall!
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