#2
Tsunami = (Awesome^3)2+1337(2*3).

Instigate = Good

Crack the Mirror, Crack the Sky = Really good, maybe a tad too repetitive (on the one riff start), although that's probably not something I would notice much with vocals.

The only thing I would recommend doing is EQ the instrument so that you can tell them apart this is even more important for parts where you have a lot of instruments playing at once, which depending on what kind of RSE model you choose can end up just sounding like a wall of noise.

Sorry for not adding anything constructive.
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(i thought hot strings would make me finger faster.)
so i tried to set my strings on fire by putting a lighter on the high e string n it cut it so wtf??!!? i passed the lighter rrly slowly by it for less then a sec n then it snapped...
Last edited by Balmazer at Nov 25, 2009,
#3
drums are horrible in tsunami, learn how to write drum parts. also the intro at least is in 6/8 (or 3/4, im not sure). the guitar parts are very good though, ill listen to the others later.

EDIT: just listened to instigate and you can clearly write drum parts so why are the drums in tsunami so horrible? in the intro riff of instigate the chords at the end of each bar drown out the other guitars riff bit.
I still maintain your drum parts could be better, go back to these songs when you can write better drum parts and edit them and theyll be awesome
For first songs these are really impressive though, keep at it!
The 3rd song is really good as well but i agree that the chorus riff got repetitive, its a good riff though dont get me wrong.
If you change these songs let me know and ill re-crit them

C4C if you have time?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1217431
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1234296
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1189816
Last edited by frankibo at Nov 26, 2009,
#4
Well to tell the truth i wrote tsunami (one of my first GP songs) at least 6 months ago, my more recent songs have better drums but ive always cared more about the guitar parts But thanks to both you guys. @Balmazer i'll try the EQ thing i've looked at it and thought it was wayy to complicated but ill look at it again. My little siblings are running around the room screaming but ill def get a look at your songs at some point
Last edited by YoungViking at Nov 26, 2009,