I was sort of disoriented by the way the rhythm changes from the intro to the first verse. Also, your mix is really far to the left for some reason, it would be alot more compelling if it were balanced.

Your voice is really pleasant and goes well with your playing/tone. Your lyrics are solid too, especially considering the song's rhythm.

Overall very tight, solid song, I just would REALLY center the mix if I were you.

c4c if you want to, on my profile, "Nidra"