#1
I started working on this the other day and wanted some feedback so...

I've smashed the gold standard with my sliver hammer
And have been left craving more
I've smashed the gold standard with my sliver hammer
And have been left craving more
A friend of the fire only gets burned in the end
But I'll keep this trapeze act going without a net
Stay loose, quick on your feet
They're all waiting for us to fall
You may be the last horse out of the gate
But your next step isn't into the grave
You may be the last horse out of the gate
But your next step isn't into the grave
I once held the keys to the kingdom
Now its my turn to follow
#2
One of the better ones I've read on here. I love that it doesn't rhyme, I love that it's broken rhythm, and the imagery and metaphors are great.

I'd like to read more if you posted it. nicely done.
Do you feel warm within your cage?

And have you figured out yet -


Life goes by?
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