#1
crit4crit

THE CURE FOR TRYPANOPHOBIA

I wanna be the archangel
That's always watching over you
Rummaging through your crayon box
And getting rid of all your blues
I'm here to collect to tears you've cried
So you can play with water colors
Then I'll paint your picture, so divine
My God you look just like your mother

No this can't be love
I don't feel any pain
Just a sense of purpose
Damn this must be a mistake

It's ironic that the highest
Heaven's gotta be lifted up
But I won't think much about it
I'll just bow down and pick you up
Wrap your hand around my finger
And I feel connected to it all
I never dreamed, I never thought
That the Hand of God would be so small

No this can't be love
I don't feel any pain
Just a sense of purpose
Damn this must be a mistake
Last edited by themarsvolta at Dec 25, 2009,
#2
I wouldn't change a thing, this piece, to me at least, is just pure win. HOWEVER, I don't understand how trypanophobia fits into this. If I'm not mistaken, that's the fear of needles. But I can't make a connection of that in this song. But it's alright, the song is just too awesome anyways.

If you have the time, could you check mine out? Not as good as yours, but yeah whatever
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=22406171#post22406171
R.I.P. Ronnie James Dio. Supplied amazing music to both me and my mother.

He will be missed.
#3
Ironic, I'm deathfully afraid of needles. Had no idea that's what it was called but still, I wouldn't change a ****ing thing man. This is honestly touching
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#4
This is really really nice. It's so cute. The love of a dad to his daughter :')
And you encapture it beautifully with the language.

I never dreamed, I never thought
That the Hand of God would be so small

^^ Definitely my favourite lines

It's just so... I don't know the word to describe it haha. Sentimental? In a really good way :P
Would make a very good song
#5
Wow man, this is just great. Its touching and just beautiful. Wouldn't change a thing.
You and I are mortal, but rock n roll will never die.
#6
You could very well be the greatest songwriter here. I'll repeat what I'm sure I've said earlier that I'd really love to hear some of these songs recorded.
#7
The most severe forms of trypanophobia are not treatable other than full sedation administered via gas prior to and during any needle procedure. I know, mine has not been treatable despite numerous attempts at therapy.

If the medical profession is serious about addressing this condition, it needs to expand its thinking to include alternatives (such as the one suggested) in the most severe cases.

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