#2
i like the guitar but the singing is near impossible to make out. You need a mic or something man. how did you record this?
#3
You have the makings of a very good track but unfortunately, as the poster above me stated, the vocals can be quite hard to hear. That's especially a shame because I actually really like your singers voice in the places when it is audible. Another small problem I had was with the transition from the twangy sounding guitar at the beginning to the cleaner more mellow sounding guitar. Both parts sounded great, but going it to the latter kind of seemed too sudden and forced. I really liked the ending with the overlapping vocals and the twangy guitar sound coming back in though, it made a really cool effect. Overall good work and keep it up my man!