#1
Packed amongst unknowing
Wait for backlash to begin
Force your way into that crowd
But you just don't fit in
Ten score to one outnumbered
Their assault rains down on you
Trapped inside their battleground
There's nothing you can do

'Cause it's not over (I don't understand...)
It's not over (What makes me a target?)
It's not over (What gives them the right to make my life a misery?)
It's not over (What makes them so much better?)

One thousand soldiers
All hypocrits
One thousand voices
So full of sh*t
Make me the victim
Just 'cause you can
No other reason
I'm who I am

Six shallow tones will sound
Transition through the day
See they're waiting for you
But can't turn the other way
Seems like every move you make
They jump to criticise
Stomp you to the ground
And twist the truth to fit their lies

It's still not over (Okay, this is going too far now)
Still not over (I can't even walk home without them following me)
Still not over (Stalking me, waiting like some sadistic pack of wolves)
Still not over (What the hell's it gonna take?)

One thousand soldiers
All hypocrits
One thousand voices
So full of sh*t
Make me the victim
Just 'cause you can
No other reason
I'm who I am

Someday you'll feel like breaking down
You've heard it all before
Nobody you can turn to
You can't take it anymore
Can't they see the winds are changing?
Now it's time for your attack
They better feel the tension rising
'Cause someday you're gonna snap!

And now it's over (Are you talking to me?)
Now it's over (Don't you f*cking walk away!)
Now it's over (Get back here, turn around, look me in the eye)
Now it's over (Put your hands up, and FIGHT!)

One thousand soldiers
All hypocrits
One thousand voices
So full of sh*t
Make me the victim
Just 'cause you can
No other reason
I'm who I am

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Wrote this to describe my school, the people in it, and where I feel my place in the system is. I'll probably rework the chorus at some point.
#2
I love it.
The word play and rhymes are great.

"One thousand soldiers, all hypocrites. One thousand voices, so full of sh*t"
It packs a punch.
The song is like a riot full of "f*ck you" attitude.

Six shallow tones will sound
Transition through the day
See they're waiting for you
But can't turn the other way
Seems like every move you make
They jump to criticise
Stomp you to the ground
And twist the truth to fit their lies

Favorite part.
Feels really raw and true.
#3
Even though it seemed immature it still seems like solid lyrics. Parts of it reminded me of say anything for some reason.