#1
(verse 1)

who would've thought you knew which direction to go?
who would've thought that the world turns so slow?
who would've thought that everything was wrong; who would've thought that my will was not so strong?
who would've thought that you would play this game for so...long?

(pre-chorus)

time is running out for you, so pray the clock stands still.
wish that i would care for you, and please know that i well...not.

(chorus)

lets take some time to play a game and know there are no rules.
please just try not to suffocate, though breathing is for fools.
the time is now, lets take some action. show the worlds who's boss.
the world is cold so warm your soul now, get rid of all that frost (on your heart)

(verse 2)

who would've thought that i never knew you well?
who would've thought that this whole time i was living in hell?
who would've thought that my pain would go away; who would've thought that my suffering would always stay?
who would've thought that your love would forever be stray?

(pre-chorus)

time is running out for you, so pray the clock stands still.
wish that i would care for you, and please know that i well...not.

(chorus)

lets take some time to play a game and know there are no rules.
please just try not to suffocate, though breathing is for fools.
the time is now, lets take some action. show the worlds who's boss.
the world is cold so warm your soul now, get rid of all that frost (on your heart)

(bridge)

the winters coming, so I'm sorry to spoil your summer of love.
just know that i do still feel something for you, but its just hate.
the sunshine gone, the clouds gather, darkness from above.
who would've thought that this darkness was always your fate?

(pre-chorus)

time is running out for you, so pray the clock stands still.
wish that i would care for you, and please know that i well...not.

(chorus)

lets take some time to play a game and know there are no rules.
please just try not to suffocate, though breathing is for fools.
the time is now, lets take some action. show the worlds who's boss.
the world is cold so warm your soul now, get rid of all that frost (on your heart)

(outro)x2

who would've though? (my love)
who would've though? (my love)
who would've though? (my love)
would run on empty?
There is a saying in poetry, "show me, don't tell me." here you are announcing everything, like an announcer to a sporting event. "Dave has the ball. Dave passes the ball. Dave picks his ass."

~Zanascross

XD epic win
Last edited by NOTAFOX at Nov 30, 2009,
#2
who would HAVE thought

and despite some other typos...not bad
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Last edited by vIsIbleNoIsE at Nov 27, 2009,
#3
Quote by vIsIbleNoIsE
who would HAVE thought

and despite some other typos...not bad


Or would've which is what i think he was aiming for. oh btw i like the lyrics bud, keep it up.
#4
Good lyrics, the verses sound like they'd be very effective in the kind of song you were describing, I especially enjoy the pre-chorus. Keep up the good work, I look forward to reading more.
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#5
didnt even think of "would've", thanks for the suggestion mr. metal. and thanks all of you, i fixed the grammer and put would've in. and im looking forward to all you guys reading more of my stuff lol
There is a saying in poetry, "show me, don't tell me." here you are announcing everything, like an announcer to a sporting event. "Dave has the ball. Dave passes the ball. Dave picks his ass."

~Zanascross

XD epic win