Well guys, first time I've used this board as I'm usually in the GB&C forum.
But anyways, I've finally got round to attempting to write a bit with my band and so far I've got this recorded (mainly because i couldn't get it to sound how i wanted it in guita pro).

Crits / comments / idea's for where i should take it?

Also, please note i made it that long because it's a demo riff, in an actual song I think I'd use maybe two repetitions ?