#1
Alright, here's another Paradox Empire song. If you liked PopCore, you should like this one too. The singer already put the song on UG but it was an old version. It's the first song I wrote. The lyrics are about death penalty. Feel free to make constructive comments Btw, sounds good in rse aswell as midi ! **Don't be confused, I know another guy named his song pop-core but it's NOT the same. You can listen to mine right here !!!**
Attachments:
Dark punk.zip
...Pop Core (2).zip
Last edited by Paradox_Empire7 at Nov 29, 2009,
#2
The "Screamo Shit" section felt really off to me; the rhythm just didn't work, in my opinion.

The bar leading into the solo feels a little weak; maybe work on this?

The "Ending Words" section feels like it might benefit from having just a slight drop in the tempo.

Other than that, I really like this piece. I also really like the idea of the fact that they had the wrong guy being announced on the radio; I think it could be really cool.

Overall, 8/10.

C4C? Anything from my sig could use it.