#1
I started writing this yesterday for no reason and I added a few more parts to it today. It starts off death-thrash-ish but then goes on into different directions. I don't know. Somewhat influenced by Woe of Tyrants. C4C. 1 to 10 if you would please. Yes, I know its "Thrash" metal. I just suck at speeling.
Attachments:
butterknifemassacre.zip
Quote by RhyseOrtiz
Banned because.. that was brilliant, champayne


Some of My Recent Songs

[thread="1403441"]Synthetic Damage WIP[/thread]

[thread="1350364"]The Nightman Awakens[/thread]

[thread="1322579"]Into the Sunset WIP[/thread]

[thread="1296556"]Frost[/thread]
[thread="1247340"]The Butter Knife Massacre[/thread]
[thread="1253933"]Into The Sparta Pit[/thread]

[thread="1224038"]Untitled Tech Thing[/thread]
Last edited by champayne at Nov 30, 2009,
#3
Quote by KoenDercksen
Sounds awesome

Love the markers xD

The "funriff" has some weird note choices in the second guitar it seems, didn't look at it but sounded off. Could've been me though.

C4C anything on my YouTube page :p http://www.youtube.com/koen37

Thanks!


Oh, that could have been the bass. I have to figure out what to do with it.

Should I just comment on the vid? I'll just do that.
Quote by RhyseOrtiz
Banned because.. that was brilliant, champayne


Some of My Recent Songs

[thread="1403441"]Synthetic Damage WIP[/thread]

[thread="1350364"]The Nightman Awakens[/thread]

[thread="1322579"]Into the Sunset WIP[/thread]

[thread="1296556"]Frost[/thread]
[thread="1247340"]The Butter Knife Massacre[/thread]
[thread="1253933"]Into The Sparta Pit[/thread]

[thread="1224038"]Untitled Tech Thing[/thread]
#5
Really like this. I think it could have been longer with a solo, but thats more of a taste kind of thing. Would love to hear this recorded. 8/10
#6
Very intense, energetic soilwork-ish melodeath. The song started off great, the OMGWTFBBQ section reminded me of Buckethead, and the structuring wasnt bad.

Overall, very entertaining track
#7
Does everyone in this forum think there's actually a genre called 'trash metal?'

Or does everyone just make the same typo, over and over and over again?
#8
Quote by Shustermeister
Really like this. I think it could have been longer with a solo, but thats more of a taste kind of thing. Would love to hear this recorded. 8/10


Oh, I'm not done yet. Just needed some crits.
Quote by RhyseOrtiz
Banned because.. that was brilliant, champayne


Some of My Recent Songs

[thread="1403441"]Synthetic Damage WIP[/thread]

[thread="1350364"]The Nightman Awakens[/thread]

[thread="1322579"]Into the Sunset WIP[/thread]

[thread="1296556"]Frost[/thread]
[thread="1247340"]The Butter Knife Massacre[/thread]
[thread="1253933"]Into The Sparta Pit[/thread]

[thread="1224038"]Untitled Tech Thing[/thread]
#9
Quote by Butt Rayge
Does everyone in this forum think there's actually a genre called 'trash metal?'

Or does everyone just make the same typo, over and over and over again?


Oh ****. How embarrassing.
Quote by RhyseOrtiz
Banned because.. that was brilliant, champayne


Some of My Recent Songs

[thread="1403441"]Synthetic Damage WIP[/thread]

[thread="1350364"]The Nightman Awakens[/thread]

[thread="1322579"]Into the Sunset WIP[/thread]

[thread="1296556"]Frost[/thread]
[thread="1247340"]The Butter Knife Massacre[/thread]
[thread="1253933"]Into The Sparta Pit[/thread]

[thread="1224038"]Untitled Tech Thing[/thread]
#10
Pretty good actually...I wasn't expecting much from the name...

I'm definately liking that "fun riff" and overall, most of the riffs are very strong and well thought-out in my opinion.
#11
Hey guys, I finished the song, and I would like to know if I should post it here or start a new thread. Thanks for the crits so far. It actually took a turn to more epic melodeath.
Quote by RhyseOrtiz
Banned because.. that was brilliant, champayne


Some of My Recent Songs

[thread="1403441"]Synthetic Damage WIP[/thread]

[thread="1350364"]The Nightman Awakens[/thread]

[thread="1322579"]Into the Sunset WIP[/thread]

[thread="1296556"]Frost[/thread]
[thread="1247340"]The Butter Knife Massacre[/thread]
[thread="1253933"]Into The Sparta Pit[/thread]

[thread="1224038"]Untitled Tech Thing[/thread]
Last edited by champayne at Dec 1, 2009,
#12
The fact that this song is a joke, and the fact that now as listening to it, even though it sounds like normal metalcore, it sounds goddamn hilarious, I find this is an awesome success. Shows how silly and funny sounding metalcore really is in my opinion.

LeT' sbe honest though past the funny novelty, and although it has a great structure, there's nothing much to comment on, it's your regular metalcore song, normal mediocre structure, and albeit funny, worth about 7 out of 10. Not bad, crit mine if you'd like?
#13
The tuning threw me off at first, but I listened to it a few times and it grew on me. I like it!

8 outta 10
Setup:
Ibanez GRG170DX
- D'Addario 9s
Squier Stratocaster
- D'Addario 11s
Kona Cutaway Acoustic
- D'Addario 12s
Kona K35 Amp
Rocktron Metal Planet Distortion Pedal
Dunlop Original Crybaby Wah