So I made a song where I used a technique called "slam" (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=en-3oL2c0uU) (though I'm nowhere as near as good) and I think it's pretty decent, though it has many mistakes, but don't let that disturb you (or let if you will). I just wanted to make something different.

"Acoustic crap"
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Hey nice playing man. It seems like you had a few good ideas in there. I would recommend practicing this song with a metronome and rerecording it. It sounds great, but there is some hesitation and timing isn't always constant. I like the laid back feel of it though. I would definitely keep working with that style. maybe grow out your nails a bit to get them in on the action to give yourself slightly sharper sound. but I like the composition and now I may have to learn to do that myself!

if you could crit my acoustic song that'd be great
and I may sound a bit hypocritical telling you to use a metronome when the song I'm asking you to crit slows and speeds a lot, but that was one of the purposes of my song https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1232182&highlight=ambient
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Last edited by fenderuser93 at Nov 29, 2009,
the percussion alongside your playing is refreshing, this sounds like a faster Iron and Wine. Its a little off time in a few places but its still definetly passable. The extended chords are nice as well, they save the progression from being trite. If you record anything else acoustic like this I would reccomend moving away from the mic a little, theres some clipping in a few places.

Did anyone else think Taylor Swift? lol

It wasn't bad, I enjoyed it. I think you need to work on your technique a little bit though. Not much else to add too that, just practise :p
cool man. i listend to how to drum youre guitar. thats what the link was. cool. i wish i could do that. nothing realy to improve on besides just timing a little bit. fun video. almost dave matthews sounding stuff. if you got drums behind that it would be very jam band. great stuff. i realy liked it. best thing i've heard today. nice man!

crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=22442889#post22442889