Hey that was quite good, intro wasn't quite right and had pauses at the start of every bar but I'm guessing that's because you're getting your fingers into position or something? Those things just take time to develop. How long have you been playing?

All in all good start =)

Think you could crit this please?


Quote by rebelmidget
your pubes are like the amazon rainforest and your body is planet earth. trim a little here and there and your life will be more comfortable
but cut down the whole damn forest and mother nature is going to cut you