#1
Evening guys, this is a song about falling for a girl and trying to find the right moment and words to say.

I'd appreciate some comments, tell me what you think

V1
I'm sitting here writing love songs baby
simply 'cause your driving me crazy
how can i tell you how i feel
how do i know when the moment is real?

Pre chorus
and what can i say? and what can i say?

C
Everytime i see you my eyes light up
i focus on you because im never giving up
Everytime i see you my eyes light up
i focus on you because im never giving up

V2
would you be mad if i spoke my mind?
would it be bad if we where two of a kind
all i wanna do is make you smile
all i wanna do is make you mine

Pre chorus
and what can i say? and what can i say?

C
Everytime i see you my eyes light up
i focus on you because im never giving up
Everytime i see you my eyes light up
i focus on you because im never giving up

V3
I wish i could read your mind
to know exactly what you are thinking
i could be your perfect man
i would be your perfect man

B
i would be that loser that carved you name into his arm
and i would definately sit here charmed
is that what you want to hear?
is that what you want to hear?

Pre chorus
and what can i say? and what can i say?

C
Everytime i see you my eyes light up
i focus on you because im never giving up
Everytime i see you my eyes light up
i focus on you because im never giving up
#2
Could be alright with music. A bit too much repetition for my liking. Perhaps you could find a rhyme that suits instead of reapeating so often?

Nevertheless, I'd be interested to hear it with music.
What is this that stands before me?

Figure in black that points at me...


FUCKETH THINE SELF