please tell me how shit this is.
its a metal song, i wrote it in half an hour...

The further you run
The more crushing the reality becomes
hide and it will find you
run and it will destroy you

Stop and turn
realise that it is hell in which you shall burn
you are never getting out of here without hurt

no, not yet another cliche hate song
a clear outline of what is to come
you cant run forever ****