#1
This rhythm piece is something I've had down for a few years, and I had a nice bluesy lead laid over it at one time, but I can't seem to remember it. What I have down now is pretty close, but it sounds off.

Any help?

Tuning: Down 1 Step (DGCFAD)

Rhythm: Dm Gm Bb C

EDIT: Reworked Lead...only 4 bars for now.
Setup:
Ibanez GRG170DX
- D'Addario 9s
Squier Stratocaster
- D'Addario 11s
Kona Cutaway Acoustic
- D'Addario 12s
Kona K35 Amp
Rocktron Metal Planet Distortion Pedal
Dunlop Original Crybaby Wah
Last edited by AlphaBlackheart at Dec 11, 2009,
#2
I'd like to point out that the rhythm is actually Dm Gm Bb C

and I like what you have, but I think you need to pick it up a bit and vary the lead a bit more. that's at least how I see this song
...Nothing you've ever...
...Planned on ever turned out...
...The way you planned...


...You're still disappointing them...