#1
Another one that I wrote recently, I'm not so sure on this one....Opinions? Comment please

Break away,
Tear down the cell of your confinement.
Your past,
Seems to haunt you.
Go ahead and take my hand,
And we will finally escape at last.

Before,
All you had was pain.
You needed ways to cope,
Close friends gave you newly found hope.
But all it did,
Was make it worse.

Your friends kept you close,
But at a stroke of chance,
They only pushed you further away.

But now I'm here,
Take my hand,
I will get rid of what you fear.
And we will escape at last.


Part II coming soon
#2
I like it, its kind of haunting in the way that the friends are trying to help but arent really doing much. Good work cant wait for part II!
Too lazy to come up with a clever or relevant sig.