#1
Messing with some less pleasing harmonies yielded this, this is a rough demo (i really need to work on the recording process) crit the riffs and such please C4C of course.

It's the first on my profile, Cheers
#2
interesting but you need to back off on the distortion some for a better sound. i'd suggest building a whole song around this for a better inpact as it seems incomplete as is. otherwise i liked it.

my CURSE OF THE MUMMY'S TOMB thread has my latest song give it a listen.
#3
Your technique stands out in this, nice job with the playing. I would suggest scooping the eq on the distorted guitars in this; they sound a little muddled. You could easily turn this into a whole metal track though, the riffs are pretty sweet.

BTW I lkistened to "Dreams (Insubstaintial)" and "Visions" was really impressed, your tone and delay are SO nice on those. You have a real knack for good harmonies. These reminded me of Between The Buried and Me's clean and ambient sections.

c4c? On my profile, "Dionysian Retribution".
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1239054
#4
Quote by Will Terhart
Your technique stands out in this, nice job with the playing. I would suggest scooping the eq on the distorted guitars in this; they sound a little muddled. You could easily turn this into a whole metal track though, the riffs are pretty sweet.

BTW I lkistened to "Dreams (Insubstaintial)" and "Visions" was really impressed, your tone and delay are SO nice on those. You have a real knack for good harmonies. These reminded me of Between The Buried and Me's clean and ambient sections.

c4c? On my profile, "Dionysian Retribution".
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1239054


Thanks both you for the crit and you especially sir, having anything i've done likened to BTBAM is high praise in my opinion
I'm definitely still tweaking my distorted tone so I will take all you guys have said on board, thanks again and i shall give your tracks a listen.