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I wrote this a few minutes ago. Before I analyze it too much and become over-critical I'd like some exterior opinions.


The bass vibrates
and the guitars are climaxing
Perfect melody
And I'm ready

A face among thousands
Lost in the mix
Away from your life
Just here for a show

So here I am
A man on a stage with a mic and some dreams
dreams of simple pleasures and afternoon schemes
So tell me

Do you feel this heat
the passionate beat
It warms your soul
Frees your mind

The sounds all fade
the lights go down
in a grand crescendo
The crowd ignites

You scream my name
A voice among thousands
the most beautiful chorus
It warms my soul
It Frees my mind
If just for a bit