#1
Hey Guys! Heres the first draft of my latest song! Its called Never Stop. All critique encourages, on Mix, Lyrics and arrangement.

Thanks so much





You were so Close
I could Breathe you in
Feel you calling my name
Feel the touch of your skin
Now I torture myself
And it tears me apart
If I could only
Take us back to the start

Just so you know
It was you all along
Got your stupid Smile
In every single song
Every subtle nuance
Every single last laugh
Imprint on my brain
Like a photograph

And Ill never Stop waiting
for you
And Ill never Stop waiting
I'll be waiting for you

Oh in 5 years time
Could you see through the rain
Would you remember me
Even know my name?
Lets take it back
Let me live in your room
Let me breathe in your air
Let me taste your perfume

And Ill never Stop waiting
for you
And Ill never Stop waiting
I'll be waiting for you

And Ill never Stop waiting
for you
And Ill never Stop waiting
I'll be waiting for you
#2
This is very impressive work. You have an excellent singing voice and the melodies throughout are excellent, very good guitar parts. How are you not famous man! Really nice mellow vibe and excellent lyrics. The quality of the recording sounds very professional.

Would love an opinion on my work if you have time here is the link, Im afraid its nowhere near the quality of yours!

http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/cyberslunk/

Thanks.
#3
Very nice song. Your voice is great, I like your singing. The chords and melodies are pretty good too. The mood of this song is sweet. It's very chill, in some ways reminds me of Hendrix, but a little more modern sounding. The quality is like perfect, and mixing is pretty much perfect. I enjoyed this song a lot. Good job!

If you could crit mine I would really appreciate it. https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1238424
OH LAAWDDYY!!!!