#1
I have an idea for a verse and have had it for a whilst but can't seem to develop it further with a repeating pre chorus & chorus as well as another verse and maybe a bridge , please help me out, here's the verse that I have so far.

Take a canvas, alpine white
Paint it black and turn on the night
draw a love song, sparkle the sky
sketch the hills and make them high

Thanks in advance for any help

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#2
Personal I am not a fan of AABB rhyming schemes, it makes it seem like a nursery rhyme :\
All I want is for everyone to go to hell...
...It's the last place I was seen before I lost myself



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#5
I actually think that if you added on to it, that'd make a better chorus than a verse.
Choruses are usually the catchy parts of songs, and AABB rhyme schemes are usually catchy.
Just my two cents though, use it however you like.
#6
love it!! to develop it you should def follow the imagery and continue on to kind of a low key love song