I'm trying to learn how to record and get better sounds. I've come a long way from when I first started. It's starting to get more challenging as I can't really tell where I need to improve now. If you could listen and if you could critique or give me any tips, it would be greatly appreciated. Thank you!

could you tell us what all you did to record that? mics/pod/VSTs... and which ones of whatever you used. that'll help us make better suggestions and critiques.