An attempt to write a short, melodic interlude. (Full with drums, bass, guitar..)

Any thoughts, opinions, changes.

It most likely needs severe help, it's the first complete (even though it's short) song I've written, and I do have a *very* bad quality recording of it in mp3 format, but for the sake of help and advice, here's the Guitar Pro 5 version.

I also have another song I'm working on getting tabbed up completely, though I again, have a bad quality demo recording of it.

Try to enjoy.
Melodic Interlude.gp5