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This is a major revision of a recent piece. It's still in need of some work, could use a lot of trimming. C4C!

how solid a foundation
but i'm still left
with an equation and no solution
with a blueprint half done
but i still can see in my mind
what will be a masterpiece

does my vision lie to me?
way out, where the heavens meet the ground
i swear i see it
now everything waiting, covered eyes and smiling

i fell asleep in the rain
i rub my eyes, now opened
i see my blueprints floating away
and i can see it's slowly flooding

now i see my failures
as they are what has defined me
and though the world is turning
i'm unmoving, yet still reaching

i will no longer wait
i make my way to the shoreline
here i meet my future face to face

though i slip beneath the high tide
the horizon still fills my mind's eye
and though the currents sway my extended arm
i feel the skyline within my grasp
submerged

hand now held above the waves
pull me skyward
my vision turns away
i look to you
then the depths fade

this is not my identity
it is you who has shaped me
We're only strays.
Last edited by Martyr's Prayer at Dec 3, 2009,