#2
there was not much to comment on, but i like what i heard. Was that a drum machine? or was that you playing? either way it sounded legit. i like the time signatures at the end. definitely expand on it and let me know, it has potential.

could you crit my demo?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1238570
thanks!
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