#2
first of all, the beat the whole time is really good, even though this isn't my genre.
the riff at 1:04 absolutely is sick sounding, excellent job.
i also like the part at 1:32 with the melody, the tone is perfect.
I think the mix needs a little work to it but other than that, i really don't have anything bad to say. Was this intented to be an instrumental? or with vocals? either way, it was very well done

great job
could you crit my demo?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1238570
thanks!
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Last edited by dontbestupid47 at Dec 4, 2009,
#3
I liked it, good riffs and melodies. But it's too short! Many good riffs come and go after only 2 or 3 repetitions. With the quality of riffs, you can easily make it longer than just 3 minutes. Especially if you decide to add vocals later...you may want it to be longer and more fleshed out. Otherwise, good stuff.

http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/AzureNight/music/all/play740171 < check out my black metal song.
#4
I agree. If i could do vocals i would add a lot more repetition. I just don't want people to get bored with no lyrics. I'll listen to yours now.
#5
Hey man, this is pretty great actually. Everything is composed so well. A little remixing would make it a bit better, but that is just the a technical problem with the composition. It does need to be longer though, by far. The atmosphere is just really enjoyable. If you want some black metal styled vocals and can not do them, feel free to get in contact with me. I am always looking for online projects to work with because I don't have a lot of time for a regular band these days with school and work.

Heres a sample if your interested: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ChjgyUzofSE
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#6
That singing ruled! I'd be glad to send you my song if you'd like. Want to message me your email?

Just checked your profile. Turns out your from Easton which is like 20 minutes from my house. What!
Last edited by ColinMacIsaac0 at Dec 4, 2009,
#7
Wow, I love the dissonance of your rhythm riffs. At first I diddnt like your tone at all but the more I listen to it the more aggressive and enraged it sounds, so I think its a keeper. This is one of the best mixed songs Ive heard in a long time on UG, maybe the rhythm guitars a little high but that might just be a taste issue. If you can do death/black vox you should definetly come up with some lyrics and give it a go. Gave it a 5 star rating.

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https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1240424
#8
I have to agree with Will, very good mix, very good double tracking also, also, I love the drums, they sound so real, and they shift panning every now and then. Which is an awesome effect. The only crit I have is that the rythem guitar has way too much highs on it and mabey too much gain, since it overpowers the lead way too much. But easily fixed. I give 5/5 also.

Crit mine?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=22494419#post22494419
#10
With regards to your question in your comment of my song, I used Acoustica Beatcraft. Modified the effects, volume and EQ of the drum sounds to get the sound that I wanted.