#1
Hey guys,
just uploaded another unfinished song idea on my profile called "lucky sip b!tch"
any critisism would be welcome,
i've never done any singing stuff before and though'd i'd have a go at making a rap metal type song
it's all about partying and getting drunk!
I'll upload the finished version in a week or two when i lay the chorus and 2nd verse vocals down

Any advice on mixing or anything would be appreciated
x

http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/PETERFKNPARKER/
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Last edited by PETERFKNPARKER at Dec 6, 2009,
#2
Your lyrics are both LOL and well suited to the rhythm; I was disappointed not to hear a chorus or more veses; I think this is worth finishing. You should project a little more in your voice though (diaphragm). Not really my style at all but this has potential.

Mix wise, turn the bass down a medium amount and the drums up a little. Throw a compressor on your voice. Should help your sound alot.

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Last edited by Will Terhart at Dec 4, 2009,
#3
Hey guys, i've updated the mp3 on my profile with some of the suggestions will made
i've made the song longer aswell, but i still havent had the oppertunity to put the rest of the vocals down yet :/
MY DESIGN/PHOTOGRAPHY TUMBLR
Quote by SEALSniper1152

If you take a jar, and whisper what you want to hate into it, then close the jar, coat it in crunchy peanut butter, and shove it up your ass. I'm pretty sure you could hate everything after that.