#1
Me and a friend wrote this
My concept: the stalker man


I see you around the corner
looking so good with roses
The moon is set half past
I see your face at last
I look at you through your glass window
You strip down to near nothing
I want you, oh how i want you
I cant have you, oh i can't have you

Stalking... is romance..
Stalking... is romance..

Letters, notes and mails been sent
Oh, how i love how you pay your rent
Your silky skin and milky thighs
Let's go travel into the skies
We'll fade, fade, we'll fade away
And make love all night and every day
I want you, oh how i want you
I can't have you, oh i can't have you

Stalking... is romance..
Stalking... is romance..

It's lyrics for a slow tempo electronic song.
#2
Well second verse was much better than the first one. It rhymed very well. I think for a parody type of song this was very neat. Those lines look so innocent but are awesome in sense to whole piece. I think the song is incomplete. You need to add more. Here's what I think you can add.

1. How the other person is behaving because of this. How she has taken your romantic feelings and turned it into her paranoia.

2. The final showdown between stalker sorry I meant lover and the victim I mean crush

Once you're done. Record this and let me know
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#3
Haha you'd wanna hire actors for the video....

Nice though.
..... i'd like it more if the title was different, and the stalking part was out of the chorus, would give the song an edgy mystery about it, and fool a lot of fools.
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