#1
i cant beleive i said goodbye
that i could walk away
if you told me to

go home alone and think of you
get undressed and cover my mind
try to sleep so i can hide
but i still think of you

i cant beleive i tried to run
so i wouldnt have to say
that im in love with you

wish that i was with you
i walk alone its dark and cold
your everything i want to hold
and im here thinking of you

four a.m but its no use
im still awake with you in mind
i shiver now its cold inside
why i stand to this abuse

cant beleive myself sometimes
the things i say to try and please
the reasons why ill never know
but i still love you
Sorry if Ive offended some kind of Punk God I should brush up on my Commandments of Punk maybe copy down the Punk Bible a few thousand times so I don't forget again sorry for my error O Punk Master Of All Things That Are Punk .
#2
I liked it. It was simple, kinda cliche, but that's alright because for one thing, it comes from your heart, and secondly, it works.

I totally connect to what your saying. The only line that didn't really fit was the "4 am" bit. It just kinda lost the rhythm in my head and the mood.

But this:
go home alone and think of you
get undressed and cover my mind
try to sleep so i can hide
but i still think of you


is the best couplet.

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Last edited by Weeping_Demon7 at Dec 5, 2009,