#6
What did I just listen to ಠ_ಠ

The intro was good but most of it after that was quite...messy, the drums don't really fit, it's more like you mashed a drum machine for the track for this.

The outro's pretty cool though, just gotta fix the drums up.
#7
whats going on with the drums?
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#9
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lol u all are racist!


It's less the word, and more the title in general.
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It's less the word, and more the title in general.

Yeah, the word seems to be pretty well accepted now, although I don't use it.

What is implied in the title is pretty shit.
#15
this is .... Beautiful....


i think i'm going to cry it's so pretty.


All sarcasm aside,

this is hardcore as shit. o_o''


the drums kind of ruin the song though.
...Until 31. I like that part :P

You need an outro.

Honestly this would be something i'd listen to with the right scream.


So i don't know if this song was a joke or not but it actually has potential.


Mind looking at mine?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1241750
#17
Ear rape.

I demand apology.

edit: Ok seriously now, with the drums try and go for some subtlety , you dont need to use the snare to emphasis everything. sometimes, not using reinforcing a beat in a guitar riff can be just as powerful.

I've attached an example, it is perhaps the worst riff in history, but hopefully you'll get the idea.
Attachments:
example.gp5
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Last edited by Julz127 at Dec 8, 2009,
#18
Quote by MaidenPriest666
dude are u good w/ drums? cuz i suck, can u help me w/ it?


You mean me?
I don't actually play drums but i'm decent at composing For em'


...I'll give it a try when i have a chance.
#19
alright, I'll write a complete drumtrack tomorrow. just let me know if it's for RSE or for MIDI. I prefer RSE but MIDI will do as well
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#20
Your drums need a lot of work. Here's my take on it; I didn't redo everything, but maybe you can just use the best parts of mine and Thorbors together.
Attachments:
xBREAKDOWNx.gp5
Last edited by herby190 at Dec 8, 2009,
#25
Wow much better.

But you definately need more instruments.

Use a seperate synth, add bass, and keep your two guitars.


I still think you need to take it easy on the snare, but even so, great improvement.

...I like your use of synth =P.*
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#27
I don't know whether to take that as a compliment or not. Is the whole part in general good?
#28
wow i posted on the wrong page. sorry dude
Last edited by Jam55 at Dec 11, 2009,
#29
I dont know if the drums were a joke or not... but if not then you should just practice a bit more
some of the riffs i actually liked and would mosh to. But er yea the drums were...hmmm...yep... I listened to none of the updated ones because im lazy

anyway you should totally review my song and be awesome
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.ph p?t=1243708
#31
i just listened to this thing...and i jizzed in my pants. epic man. loved it.
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#33
This might be better if the drums weren't completely retarded. Bar 37 and after would be cool if you actually had some standard rhythm going...