#1
Looking for some help with lyrics based off of the Ocarina of Time. Heres what I have so far.


Verse 1:
A wicked man of the desert
The deku tree said
After he was cursed
And he ended up dead

Then to hyrule castle
and to collect those stones
But then I watched ganondorf take you
away from your home

Chorus:

So I'll go to that castle
Ganondorfs got you in.
Saving your triforce
From bowing to his

I'll use the light arrow
Turn him into a beast
And then I will hold you
The second your released

Verse 2:

Locked for seven years
Ganondorf took rule
And I realized it
Would end in a duel

Light Shadow Water
Fire Forest Spirit
I awakened five sages
And the seventh, you're it

Bridge:
And I'll go to the Zoras
The hylians and the Gorons
And ride Epona round hyrule field
Bridge:

Chorus

Ending:
For I'm the hero of time
Triforce of courage is mine
And in the sacred realm he'll be sealed
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If you have any changes please try and keep the syllable count the same.

Thank you!
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#3
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Ummm.... Are you being serious?

yeah...why wouldn't I be?
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#4
I'd try not to mention everything by name, but instead use more allusion and imagery. Also I'd try to have more about the spiritual and moral battle that goes on in this game, rather than the physical. I'd love to see more feeling as opposed to just a plot summary
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#5
i love zelda but this is a tad cheesy, sorry.
it seems like a list of things that happen in the game, whaat you SHOULD do is focus more on one theme of the game and go in depth.
i.e. song about ganondorf could explore thems of darkness, hate, revenge etc.