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Looking for feedback and tips before I re-record this song. Its an old one I recorded at home.

The lyrics go like this. The original song can be found at http://www.guitarandsong.com/songs.htm track 5

Lonely spaces in these empty times
No expression drawn across your face it’s no disgrace at all
Sick of times before but I don’t know why
Never told the lies can see it written, written in the sky
Don’t know why we can’t stand up and fight
We always fall down
Hold your head in hands that feel the pain
Of our past lives
It’s written in the stars

Found a place to go that fills the space
Didn’t know if we could change our ways and listen to our dreams
Now the time has come to pass you by
I feel a change has come a reason to return and stand up tall now
Pushing back against the hurt inside
It never dies down
Hold your head high numb the pain inside
It’s a past life
That’s written in the stars

Now the time has come to leave this place
Didn’t look around let my feet ever touch the ground
People always ask if you’ll return
Cannot tell the lie but lift my head and look towards the stars
Pushing back against the hurt inside
It never dies down
Hold your head high numb the pain inside
It’s a past life
That’s written in the stars