#1
This song is a work in progress. It gets a bit repetitive, but with vocals it'll definitely sound a lot better and less repetitive. Don't complain about how it's a work in progress, I want to know whether people like how it is so far.
Attachments:
Work In Progress.zip
#2
all in all it's pretty generic. Will be okay with vocals, but the chord progression are kinda lama.

PLEASE for gods sake dont use that 7-8-7-5-7 Chord progression, you can use everything but that. The rhythm that goes over this part is terribly overused too, you have to change that.

Aside from that there's not really much to talk about. One of those songs with focus on the singer. Unless you write a really good brisge and a kickass solo this song is nothing special

c4c? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1241196
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