#1
Dear L---,

Would decapitating you in the park
be an acceptable public display of affection?
I promise I'll hang your head from
the tallest buckeye tree on The Oval.

I'll lead your headless corpse across
the path to William Oxley Thompson,
making sure the bells ring
and nobody crosses us.

Then I'll buy you a wedding dress
and when those bells ring again
we will be getting married
and everybody will be in joy.

I'd do this for you,
but would you return the favor?
Please,
murder me.

Love,
J---
Lord Gold feeds from your orifices and he wants to see you sweat.
Lord Gold probes you publicly and makes your pussy wet.
Now say his name.....
#2
Apart from the whole necrophilia business and the whole dark romance thing I think you had a cool idea. The main problem with your piece was too much effort to paint a particular picture inside my head. When an artist paints a picture he looks at the color like you and I look at these squared screens that we are reading from right now. The important part keeps our attention because its main purpose is to sell itself. I felt like that important part got lost somewhere in between but that can be me though.
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