#1
ok so its my first time EVER posting, and i really dont think its good so just tell me, i have music and everything so please dont add or remove any lines, only replace/improve them, also, id like to keep the same meaning

Things have changed;
everything is good now
Life is great;
I think I can explain how
I’ll start with love;
it’s the best thing to ever happen to me
There is this girl,
she means the world to me

And I swear—on my life—
I’ll be there when you need me
I swear, just say my name,
I’ll be by your side just wait and see
I’ll love you when all you do is cry
I’ll love you when you can’t see me
I’ll love you ‘till there is no sky
I’ll always love you, just believe me
When I told you that
I was tired of our little relation-shit
You agreed with me
you agreed that we really had to fix it


Now look at us
we’re exactly how we’re supposed be
But as long as I’m with you
everything’s fine with me
And I swear—on my life—
I’ll be there when you need me
I swear, just say my name,
I’ll be by your side just wait and see
You may’ve made me laugh,
you may’ve made me cry,
But I’ll always love you
Until I die

I’ll make a promise to you
if you swear to keep it
cause I don’t want to lose you
And when I’m gone
I want to know
that I was the world to you
And I swear—on my life—
I’ll be there when you need me
I swear, just say my name,
I’ll be by your side just wait and see
Sometimes we may lose,
sometimes we may win,
When things go bad,
get up and try again
#2
I really dig your peice man, I like how straightforward you were with your feelings, but how you made light of them and took it in stride. i like that, and I also like the last four lines immensely, they really sum up the song. Good work.

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