#1
Im doing this track for a school project, as an artistic rendition of my community service i did, I was really influenenced by Explosions in the sky, let me know what you think. its the first one, "a lesson in space" http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/Ardie12/ leave a link and ill get you back, thanks
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Epiphone Les Paul Standard
Epiphone Elitist Paul Mccartney Texan
Orange Tiny Terror
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Vox V847 Wah
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Boss RC-2 Loop pedal

Me playing
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l0unpDZFIWA
#2
You definetly have a distilled post-rock sort of vibe going in this. The feedback on the echoy guitar lines sounds pretty bad (~1:21), you should trim it out if possible. The tones are overall pretty nice; the echo/reverb trem picking could be a little louder I think. Bass and drums sound great, if anything cut a little of the mids on the drums coz the ride is a little obtuse thru the whole thing. Same thing once the heavier drums come in around 2:00, kind of breaks up the continuity with that mids heavy sound.
Overall its a really solid little piece.

c4c? "Paths" - I think the intro to this sounds like E.I.T.S., you'll probably dig it.
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1241533
#3
Yeah the guitars definitly have that post rock vibe, I love that clean guitar sound. The tremelo picking was a nice touch. Drums and bass are good, however they do get very repetitive for the first 2 mins - after the change its all good. I really like the heavier part - it keeps the nice loose feel but adds a bit of oomph. Not much to say I thought it was well done, real faults to make other than the repetive drums probably?

If you have time - https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1241514

cheers
#4
Very trippy, I like it a lot. Everything sounds very professional, in my opinion. I like the tremolo picking as well. Honestly, couldn't really find anything wrong with this, I really like it as a whole.
#5
I like it a lot. The only problem is that there are barely any changes in the song. Like it's always the same chords over and over and you just change the melodies that sound and change to distortion or clean tone or chorused tone which is fine. I know it's an ambient song, but it could be far more relaxing if you create some minor tension bits so when you get back to the root tone, it becomes much more relaxing.
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