#1
comment for comment.
criticism appreciated.

Stream of conscience usurps us.
Dissolve that which cannot be and never was,
Distilling symmetry from illusion
Until the process reflects itself in me
As through us truth is drained
From the blood of a defiant god.
#2
its very good, but its not really long enough to make a point o_O
Sorry if Ive offended some kind of Punk God I should brush up on my Commandments of Punk maybe copy down the Punk Bible a few thousand times so I don't forget again sorry for my error O Punk Master Of All Things That Are Punk .
#4
cool cant wait to see it
Sorry if Ive offended some kind of Punk God I should brush up on my Commandments of Punk maybe copy down the Punk Bible a few thousand times so I don't forget again sorry for my error O Punk Master Of All Things That Are Punk .