#2
If this is supposed to be a rough recording Ill skip mixing crit. The second rhythm riff (0:10) sounds a little jarring after the first riff; Id let it come in a little later. Melodies are well done, if you can nail them with better technique it will make them sound alot better (especially bending; some things sound a little out of tune)

C4C? "Paths of Spectres"
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1242026
#3
i enjoyed it, and, as will pointed out, mixing is alittle off, but other than that, it was great would have been nicer with drum and bass tracks to fill it in, but its just a demo, so I'm sure it'll turn out better than it already is

EDIT: c4c https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1241858
#4
I honestly like the tone you have and the track itself.
It seemed a bit "odd" to me at first, but it warms up to you after a few plays.
Good job.