#2
You only really needed to post this video once...the other thread didn't even have the link...

Not bad. Just clean it up a bit. Your rhythm is a bit off at points and you speed up toward the end.

You seem to be missing plenty of notes though. And those last bends are inexpressive. You seemed a little nervous playing for the camera.

Work on it some more and use a warmer tone. Maybe practice it with a metronome.
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#3
Pretty nice dude, just need a bit of tidying up and practice and it will be awesome
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