It's the first song. No vocals yet, just the drum machine and guitars, sadly. Any opinions appreciated, and crit fo crit.

Also, the solo was something I was trying to do along the lines of non-traditional. Tell me if it sucks or if it's got some merit please!
Very strange song structure, its original though. I think it would sound better a bit faster. I guess thats just my metal side speaking. Its a unique sound man, with a good drummer itd be more enjoyable to me.
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i like the way it comes out and it entertained my ears till that solo that was realy bad. It reminds me of finch. I like how it never losses the flow. Quality for the most part except that solo that was horrable