#1
I just finished this song after a couple of hours - it is mainly inpired by Suffocation, but also Deicide and Decapitated. Check it out!
Attachments:
TechnicalDM.zip
Last edited by Pingis_Or_Death at Dec 9, 2009,
#2
Nice brutal intro. Didn't really like second riff, it lost my intrest. It was just kinda something that I could listen but I wouldn't remember anything from that.
Third riff were cool. Very groovy. Cool break riff, awesome! But when it really starts it sounds like pretty odd. Didn't really like drums 44- on. Not very creative..
57-58 sounds totally like deicide, awesome!
Annoying melody. Ideas were cool, but sounded like pretty off.
Didn't like 67-. I loved guitar at 72.
Overall pretty basic stuff. 7/10.

Crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=22543960#post22543960
#3
Quote by xbitmetal
Nice brutal intro. Didn't really like second riff, it lost my intrest. It was just kinda something that I could listen but I wouldn't remember anything from that.
Third riff were cool. Very groovy. Cool break riff, awesome! But when it really starts it sounds like pretty odd. Didn't really like drums 44- on. Not very creative..
57-58 sounds totally like deicide, awesome!
Annoying melody. Ideas were cool, but sounded like pretty off.
Didn't like 67-. I loved guitar at 72.
Overall pretty basic stuff. 7/10.

Crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=22543960#post22543960

What do you mean when the break riff starts it sounds weird? Is it too fast? The melody might be a bit dissonant, but it's just basic diminished stuff and I used it to lead back to the intro riff. Why didn't you like 67-, when it's the same riff used at the beginning of the song, which you already said you liked?