#1
Ten million paper towels
Falling in the sun

Two thousand and eighty flowers
To tell you you're the one

Five hundred and thirty hours
Pretending I'm not on the run

From you...

Maybe not today
Maybe not so soon
Won't you make me stay?
Won't you make the room
For me?

Two hundred and five wars
I'd fight to be by your side

Behind the three thousand doors
Lies the love for you I try to hide

Swim to eighty six shores
Of seas I would cross tonight

For you...

Maybe not today
Maybe not so soon
Won't you make me stay?
Won't you make the room
For me?


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#2
*cough* lame
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#3
Seems like a lot of songs have been about a large of number of random objects. In this case, I do not think that paper towels generate the right imagery. The chorus seems decent though.
Listen to my songs on my profile pretty please


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