Ok final spam for the day

This song my mate and I just finished for my band.
Had a play around with some cool chords and riffs, simple riff-harmony-riff-harmony structure.
Oh yea and an irrelevant breakdown for the hell of it
The bit that says solo will have a solo there one day (funny that!)

Please give feedback and ill do the same for yours

Last edited by Jam55 at Dec 11, 2009,
The leads on "irrelevant breakdown" are totally disgusting, I think you should change them entirely.

Everything else is awesome, the bass lines are ****ing epic.
Good work!
the whole F G# G lead you use in the verse is too cliche imo....I feel like I've heard it too many times on ultimate guitar lol. The tech bridge happy thing was a bit too drawn out as well, possibly shorten it or use some chord progressions. Didn't care for the reintro. The rest of the song sounded to me like 1 big outro.

overall 4.7/10. needs work and some more cool chords or progressions

c4c? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1243743
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I don't really see any problems with this song, although I dislike its genre a lot it.
Ths song is a typical melo death/metalcore song as the title says, but in contrast to most of the *core posted here, it isn't that generic. Rather the opposite.
One of the few metalcore pieces that I could actually listen to, only some minor flaws in there.

I loved the melody in the chorus part, I'd underline that with a few bends to give it a softer feel.
First note of the solo was good, I hope that part comes out well later, definitely want to lsiten to it if it ever gets tabbed out.
Outro was good too, fit's the song.

All in all a quite decent song, doesn't get boring and has nice riffs, I can't really understand the crit of ~Flounder~, I really liked the reintro. With a decent solo it's 8.5/10, with an epic solo it's 9/10 :cheers.

Please check out this song in return https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1241196
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I smell some BTBAM influence?

I like it, didn't really see anything wrong with anything, can't wait for a solo and a recording.

If you have time: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1244334
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Last edited by ChemicalFire at Dec 12, 2009,