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I wrote this about not feeling wanted and being ignored.
Please leave some feedback, this is my first full song i have written. It is called Behind Closed Doors

Helpless
Watching the world deceive me
I see it all go as I am standing still
Nameless
No one will try to save me
I get up but I fall, and I watch by the windowsill

As everything around me moves on
Leaving me in the dust
Left with no one to trust
Cause I'm always locked behind,
Behind closed doors

Aimless
Having no idea where this is going
Just shrug it off and pretend that nothing's wrong
Mindless
Not allowed to be myself
Shove me back inside because out there I don't belong

As everything around me moves on
Leaving me in the dust
Left with no one to trust
And I'm still locked behind,
Behind closed doors

Yeah, I'm forever held behind
Trapped within my mind

Shameless
Making up for lost time
Passing them by as they all struggle behind
Worryless
I'm taking back what deserves to be mine

Everything around me had moved on
But the doors soon opened for me
They let go and set me free
Now I'm leaving that all behind,
Behind closed doors...


If theres anything about it I should change please make suggestions. If it is good then tell me what I should keep doing.

Thanks
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Epiphone Les Paul Standard
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Dunlop SW30 Slash Signature Wah
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Digitech Hardwire DL-8 Delay/Looper
Boss BD-2 Blues Driver
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