#1
Wake your eyes
Crosshatched tattooes kiss my skin
Sunday's fire
Old soul coals turning in
Take a walk
Smacking boots on Monday's arm
People talk
Peel the smile from someone's face

And though it's snowing
My winter's over
And though the leaves have gone
It's over

Headlights moan
Water slashing through their eyes
Windows groan
People greyly close their eyes
Enter one
Tangerine look on my smile
Exit one
Face is slipping to his thighs

And though it's snowing
My winter's over
And though the leaves have gone
It's over
#2
oh wow, the verses are a little loose, good but loose, and then the chorus is just perfect, great job,
Sorry if Ive offended some kind of Punk God I should brush up on my Commandments of Punk maybe copy down the Punk Bible a few thousand times so I don't forget again sorry for my error O Punk Master Of All Things That Are Punk .