#2
Not bad...........considering it's your first attempt at playing and singing at the same time.
It can be a challenge until you get used to it. I'm not sure if its because you're trying to sing while playing, but your guitar rhythm is not tight at all. It tends to wander around a bit....and doesn't hold a solid rhythm to support the song.
That's really important when it's just an acoustic and vocals. The guitar "IS" the rhythm section.

As for the vocals, it's not bad.......It sounds like it was recorded with a room mic, so it's not very full. The tone of your voice could use more work.......your pitch seemed right on though. Better tone and articulation would make it sound better. Keep on working on it.

c4c...................
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#4
Quote by dolphinfan2k5
Get that guitar in tune man.


Yeah.......that too. I forgot to mention that.