#1
Hey all,
Me and my friend have decided to collaborate and make a song based on this riff I pulled out from long ago. So we came up with the idea that the song would be about a guy who's broken up with a girl and is hung up on what to do, all set in the winter time. We wrote this because the song reminded us of a christmas jingle.

Comments, feedback and critique appreciated!

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Walking through the snow
Seems so much harder without you
Can’t pull myself together
And build the strength to pull me through

Though I could stare at the stars forever
In the night with this cigarette
I can only remember the candles in the bedroom
Where we laid in a gentle sweat

I know that I let go
For all the wrong reasons
But your love changed long ago
Along with the seasons

This snow that falls on the land
Doesn’t tell me winter’s fine
I can only remember your cold hand
That I wished would stay in mine

Where do I go?
Now when you’ve left my frozen tears?
Time goes so slow, you know?
But it’s only been two years

I guess I’ll close my eyes
And climb this mountain, until I
Come across the end
Where the sun will shine
And I look to the sky and say
I’ve lost everything
#2
It's nice dude, welldone, I would like to hear this with the melody and such, looking good tho.
#4
Awsome dude, i REALLY like it. Keep me posted on the progress of the song. Again, the lyrics are great.
#7
Quote by martinnes
It's nice dude, welldone, I would like to hear this with the melody and such, looking good tho.


Thanks dude. This is a nice change from my darker, more recent works, so I'm more than happy to see good responses to this. I'll have the melody (or complete song up soon)